IELTS Academic Writing Task 1

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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Sample Essay Correction


IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Sample Essay 

The given diagram shows the 2013 and 2014 unemployment rate for women in four UK countries, namely England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland.

Overall, the unemployment rate rose in only one of the countries while it dropped in the other three. Of the four countries unemployment among women was less of a problem in Northern Ireland and Wales than in England and Scotland.

Joblessness among women rose in Scotland. It increased by 6 percentage points from 6.10% in 2013 to 6.70% in 2014. On the other hand, it fell in the other three countries dropping from 6.80% to 6.50% in England, from 5.40% to 5% in Wales, and from 5.60% to 4.60% in Northern Ireland.

The most significant reduction in women’s unemployment was experienced by Northern Ireland where it fell by a full percentage point. England underwent the smallest decline of only 0.3%.

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