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Dear Survey Administrator,
Thank you for including me in your survey regarding mall parking issues. I believe option A, with its emphasis on rapidly increasing parking by converting vacant adjoining land, would serve shoppers best. I believe the second option, building a multistory parkade, would be too expensive, take too long, and provide a solution beyond what is needed at this time.
My preference is based on the complete chaos I have witnessed in the mall’s car park during recent weeks. While several shoppers have left the lot and taken their business elsewhere, others have simply abandoned their cars illegally. As you can imagine, this has created major hurdles for everyone. Legitimately parked shoppers have become totally frustrated trying to navigate their vehicles around badly parked cars. Needless to say, this car park insanity is creating an unsafe environment for all concerned. It needs to be resolved quickly, before someone gets badly hurt.
I’m pretty sure that you could have the conversion completed by a local construction company. There are several reputable ones to choose from. Not only would using a local company be less expensive, but it would also pour some much needed money into the local economy.
I hope the mall succeeds in resolving its parking issue satisfactorily, inexpensively and quickly.
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